The House on Mango Street
For this essay we had to choose from two prompts. I decided to choose the prompt that focused on Esperanza's growth. My initial grade before revising was 75/100, but after revising my grade went up to a 92/100. One the other hand, I gained some skills while writing this essay. For example, I learned how to properly write an essay. Some skills that I still need to work on when writing essay's is looking over my writing before turning it in.
For this essay we had to choose from two prompts. I decided to choose the prompt that focused on Esperanza's growth. My initial grade before revising was 75/100, but after revising my grade went up to a 92/100. One the other hand, I gained some skills while writing this essay. For example, I learned how to properly write an essay. Some skills that I still need to work on when writing essay's is looking over my writing before turning it in.